Logotype in progress

 Of my fifty logotypes I chose these three to be critiqued. They all come from the idea of the unique water ripple and the tag line, splash of clash.

< This one is using the typeface Fabada and the entire original symbol.

< This logotype is using Lane- Narrow and the ripple is forming from the typeface out.

< This is a combination of the above two using the Fabada typeface and half of the ripple.